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Removed as took up too much space and information repeated elsewhere.

 

Anef and Benran are interviewed by Saref following Yareph's disappearance.

This scenes was removed for space and the information reported second hand to Nyvar in the inn.

 

Cantrok searches Yareph's room, makes a record of the diary box and takes the poison.

My editors convinced me I had too many POV in the book and Sarah's POV was removed so this scene had to go.

 

Sarah overhears Ceren giving Nyvar his mission to find Dave and Robbie.

My beta readers will know this one.  Removed with much resistance from me.  

 

Nyvar telling Robbie and Dave a story on the road out of Anyana

One of my dad's favourite scenes. Again removed as the book was too long.

 

Sarah brought a tent with her and Ceren tries to work out what it is.

Scene shortened in the final version. 

 

Amy and Sarah have to work out Grayonian fashions. A bit more detail in how the clothing is arranged.

Another one of my favorites that was removed with much foot dragging from me.

 

Nyvar accidently dyes Sarah's hair purple when trying to get Dave and Robbie back to the right colour

Removed for space.

 

Dyran brings toys in to keep the children occupied. Paul discovers that basketballs are not a universal toy.

Removed to shorten book. 

 

Yareph finds a dark alter on the road to Grayonia. Put in to hint at the dark cult starting up in Scara that features in later books.

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